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Pillow-talk...? But Sanji doesn't know what to do with the compliments not earned with his service
#one piece#black leg sanji#roronoa zoro#zosan#sanzo#my art#doodles#shitty doodle#it's a shitty doodle but I like the dialogue lol#I'm like 50% sure I stole text from somewhere but I have no idea where lol#One Piece is such old n big fandom that everytime I do smth here I'm like “someone did that before didn't they” lol
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The world is perfect; you seem to have missed the memo
#persona 5#goro akechi#ren amamiya#shuake#akeshu#akira kurusu#HOO BOY THIS TOOK A WHILE#i had to redo the first four pages too lmao#i told myself “i'm gonna use the text tool” to write the actual dialogue#and then i didn't#so: behold! my shitty handwriting
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does anyone else ever like. edit and clarify their own wording when talking to themself. like "nah actually that sentence was mid, let's take it from the top" or "and by [word/phrase i just used] i mean [explanation], not [alternative interpretation that wasn't what i meant, even though i know what i meant because i'm talking to myself]" or am i just a total weirdo.
#🐉#its not like i think im gonna be arrested for thought crimes is the thing. i just dont like my own inner dialogue being shitty to#listen to and converse with. so im like. hmm but what if there was a better way of saying this.
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[s03e12 - The Coming of Arthur ]
Druids: We can’t just hand you over the cup of life. It’s a powerful-
Arthur: Fine. What can I do to convince you?
Druids: Enter a permanent union, with him *nods at Merlin*
Merlin: WHAT?!
Arthur: …
Arthur: You’ll give me the cup of life and all I have to do is marry Merlin?
Druids: Yes
Arthur: Great. Then let’s get this over with.
Merlin: Have you lost your mind?! I can’t marry you.
Arthur: Why not?
Merlin: because … i … we … i don’t know?
Arthur: Wonderful. Now we have that cleared up, let’s start. We don’t have rings, but will this do? *hands over his Mother’s sigil*
Druids: *can’t believe it was that easy* Sure.
Merlin: WTF? *denied feelings are secretly rejoicing*
#merlin bbc#dialogue prompt#it’s shitty but you get the idea#merlin episode au#s03e12 the coming of arthur#or more like the sudden marriage of merthur#what i really wanted to happen before the druids just handed over the cup to arthur#merthur
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sometimes i just gotta write/draw them arguing it keeps me going
#toontown#toontown corporate clash#ttcc#cathal bravecog#cathal ray toby bravecog#multislacker#graham payser#graham ness payser#pacesetter#and why they ourple#..i think it mentions flint enough to justify tagging him .#flint bonpyre#firestarter#strawglicks art gallery#it feels like its been a while since i invested this much time into the boys ..#i rlly miss em. so i took one of my trillion dialogue prompts involving them#and made it into a comic ! this was a learning experience for me and im proud of the result#big fan of graham interrupting cathal to call him a freeloading little bastard . some of my best work i think#also i think flint watches shitty drama reality tv. ok bye
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anyway forcing myself to thumbnail my comic
#this is like the fifth time i’ve tried to do this#again dialogue is the hardest part#ignore the shitty lighting im in bed#orphe yaps#delete later
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Drew @keikakudom's reset resort au! It's a really fun twist on canon and the designs are amazing. And it has the most fascinating dynamics!
(The original design for charlie didn't include a tail, but I really wanted to draw her with a tail, hope that's okay!)
Ps I don't think they usually have conversations like this. Vox is very busy and rarely steps into the redemption part of the business.Butt I figured occasionally they'll discuss the progress of redemption? Perhaps on break or something? Idk
I guess it's just a hypothetical scenario of them chatting on break
#hazbin hotel#vox#charlie morningstar#au: reset resort#feat: really shitty attempt to write dialogue#I am never underestimating how hard it is to write good#in character dialogue ever again#also#dialogue boxes#what are they?#my art
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Test dialogue animation
#:3#doing a project for a class and I wanted to test out what the dialogue would be??#I dunno I think I like this#very shitty animation but I think it’s neat#animation#moving#2d animation#ottto#D3-C1#artists on tumblr#art#my art#finished piece#digital art#2024 art#my oc art#erm I dunno I think I’m very funny#D3 is talking in binary!!#also will probably be reblogging this and the cable management at some point because I have a ego#yeah btw i do find myself funny#guh I also really really do love the creatures design!!#super cutieeee tbh#om lord I forgot i actually didn’t write a joke for D3 to say so it’s just saying ‘insert joke here’#but the joke still lands because you don’t need to know what D3 is saying just the outcome
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Something something it's a metaphor. Hair as a form of communication but also as passage of time and also as a way for letting people in and also as a detail etc etc you get it
Actual explanation in the tags btw
I'm really nervous about this comic actually, is not the best. It doesn't make sense, and the art is mid, but I put love in it and I think that's enough
#sbg#sbg (webtoon)#aiden clark#aiden sbg#ashlyn sbg#ben clark#ben sbg#logan sbg#taylor sbg#tyler sbg#school bus graveyard#hey full pages#hey its a comic oh my god its a comic#hi hi hi#really nervous about this thing actually becuase its not very good but i have mkre content lined up#so i dont mind one shitty thing breaking contaiment#metaphors about hair and about allowing people in via innocuous mundane things#watch canon explain the hair color thing and watch me cry about it#the concept is actually not communicated alright#so ill put it here#Roots as in finding his place with these people#because even if theyre running for their lives all the time#they are friends yk? and he loves them#across the comic you can see so clearly that Aiden loves every single one of them and that to someone who travels a lot and probably#struggles emotionally the act of “putting down roots” must be hard#so his hair here is a representation of his roots growing deep into the people he loves and the things they do together#and the last dialogue is meant as a way to let THEM see that he trusts them#but idk i wrote it but i dont know what im talking about#make your own interpretation i think thats more fun#berry art
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aro culture is getting really annoyed with the relationships unit in your sociology class because the whole thing is just 100% amatonormativity.
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if think your teacher, professor, and/or TAs might be interested in discussing the concept, I have some idea of bringing up the topic?
I'd personally say something like, "Hi, During our section in sociology around relationships, I couldn't help but think it would be interesting to discuss how a sociological theory called "amatonormativity" might relate to these lessons. I gathered a few sources from the professor who coined it, a thesis written on it, and a law review written about the connection between it and laws in the USA. There's some connections between its use in feminist thought and in queer theories, and I'd love to know your thoughts about it. I personally was thinking of when [specific statement] was said, and how I would apply this theory. I hope it's as interesting to you as it is to me."
Coiner's current webpage: https://elizabethbrake.com/amatonormativity/
Thesis: https://vc.bridgew.edu/honors_proj/330/ (click download in upper right hand corner for the PDF, depending on the individual it may be worth downloading and sending that rather than a link)
Law Review: https://uclawreview.org/2022/06/09/amatonormativity-in-the-law-an-introduction/
#aro culture is#aro#aromantic#actually aro#actually aromantic#ask#mod leo#the general thing is: if you approach a teacher/professor/TA i promise you most of them are THRILLED to see a student engage with the topic#even if it's critical! but you HAVE to watch your tone. i'm not tone policing - you're so allowed to feel and talk about how harmful it is!#- but when you start from excitement or neutral 'how do you feel?' it creates dialogue#and people learn from each other when there's back and forth. practice your 'i statements' like 'i like this theory because i feel...'#not 'your lessons are shitty and promote topics that hurt me and my community'#cause like. no one wants to engage with someone who starts off the bat with that#talking shit about it within community and already supportive folks >>> talking shit about it with someone who's likely unaware at best#and will probably assume it's a weird passive aggressive way to say you don't like them and want them gone#y'know? all about communication skills#<- took a seminar on intrapersonal communication in queer communities in college and suggested how many materials assumed romo/sexual#relationships when discussing boundaries and such and how in queer spaces it's especially important to talk about ALL types of relationship#because we are likely to need that guidance in everyday microaggressions too! and the outside therapist helping with the course was SO#into that and SO excited to bring that energy to the class
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sorry to say but i do actually think the focus tlovm puts on showing the workings and backgrounds of npcs is actively taking away from one of the main things that made campaign 1’s story compelling (notably. vox machina and their bonds with each other beyond the people they’re in love with)
#sorry i don’t need to see ripley’s background when other dialogue has already told me she has experienced trauma and made shitty decisions#because of it#i also don’t need As Much screen time explaining to me that . kima and allura love each other and kima is hotheaded and it stresses allura#out. when at the same time it feels like vox machina hasn’t spoken to each other about anything other than battle plans at all this season#like. even the TWINS. yknow. the codependent freaks. have only spoken in quips during pre-battle things or as like.#conversations about the relationships they’re in#and don’t get me started on the fact that the hot tub scene (one i love to be clear) is deeply maddening because it’s the only conversation#vax and percy have. and it’s a fucking shovel talk.#the fact that what i thought was a compelling conversion of percahlia was made much less compelling by putting an emphasis#on telling the others. which while being just. feeling very surface. is stupid given the aforementioned vax shovel talk#tlovm spoilers#tlovm
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Behold!
finally watched the new smiling friends episode
#immediately thought of this#disco elysium#harry du bois#smiling friends#smiling friends allan#allan red#shitty edit#the expression#smiling friends spoilers#smiling friends season 2#was originally gonna be just the screenshot of the show with the dialogue in the caption but decided#fuck it#and actually edited it together
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@prongsfoot-microfic “tis better to have loved and lost.” cussing, unrequited prongsfoot and wolfstar
i love you.
“Prongs?”
“Yeah, Padfoot?”
“What… what would you do if I told you I loved you?”
Pause.
“As a friend?”
“No. More than that.”
“Oh.”
Pause.
“I’d say that I’m honored. That I’m really happy you care about me that much. But…”
Pause.
“I don’t feel the same.”
“Oh. Alright.”
Pause.
”Do you… do you feel that way, Sirius?”
“What? No, I don’t, I just— I just, you know, got curious. Someone… someone said that to me, earlier, and I just…”
“Wanted to know how somebody else would react?”
Pause.
“Yeah, I get it. Good luck on the potions test.”
“Yeah.”
Pause.
“You too, James.”
…
“Moony. Moony. Remus.”
“…Sirius? What—”
”He doesn’t feel the same.”
Pause.
“Oh.”
Pause.
“Sirius, I—”
“I’m so fucking tired.”
“I know. C’mere.”
Pause.
“Tis’ better to have loved and lost.”
“What?”
“I read it somewhere, Moony. I… got reminded of it.”
Pause.
“It doesn’t really feel better.”
“Yeah. Never does.”
“…Have you been… rejected? Before?”
“Not yet. Not directly.”
Pause.
“But I know they love someone else. Someone better.”
“How?”
“They told me. They talk to me, a lot. About that person.”
“Oh, Moony, I…”
Pause.
“That… sucks.”
“Yeah. Get some sleep, Sirius. We got a busy day tomorrow.”
“…Ok. Sorry about—”
“Shh.”
Pause.
“There’s nothing to be sorry for. Night, Siri.”
#prongsfoot#bambibelle#wolfstar#james potter#sirius black#remus lupin#microfic#unrequited love#slightly less angsty (?)#trying out something new#dialogue#inspired by my shitty life#this actually happened#i was sirius#one of my guy friends was remus#and one of my closest friends (a girl) was james#the dialogue was adjusted for the prompt#but that’s pretty much it#i tagged the prongsfoot big bang on accident the first time 😭😭😭
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i think what we're missing in the batman fandom is shitty 2000 jokes
#since batman was alive when the sahara was still the sea#and had a lot of adult fans#we never got the cringey 2000 jokes#the peeta and bread jokes#the jason and brick jokes#the persassy#we never got batfamily dialogues in different colours in little posts#we need more of this shitty energy#like them in a colour coded one direction meme#with shitty quotes#batman “MISTERY” in a ugly cursive font#nightwing would be HEART#jason STRENGHT#tim is SMART#damian is CUTE#and then the girls of course#we could've done the whole superwholock and demigod/tribute/wizard debacle much better#just silly things saying “your vigilante uniform” with like the shittiest clothes possible for vigilanting#and six inch heels#batman#bruce wayne#dick grayson#jason todd#tim drake#damian wayne#stephanie brown#cassandra cain#robin dc#nightwing#batfamily
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shanks and buggy denden au where:
the crew kinda splits up in the 2 year gap before roger's death and in an effort to make sure their sons cabin boys are alright, rayleigh puts them on the ship denden plan
so their little apt in loguetown has two dendens, one in the living room and one in their bedroom
they use it all the time. to call oden and toki, to call spencer. even to call roger, hoping that he'll pick up. (he never does)
phone calls are nice but nothing beats talking face to face and visual dendens are on the market they're just super fuckin expensive and both shanks and buggy are saving up for one. it'll be nice to see momo amd hiyori again.
anyway the execution happens and then the loguetown breakup and they pack up their apt in complete silence, each of them taking one denden.
(it'll be a decade and a half before they see each other again.)
they both expect the phone plan to just get cancelled but one day the mail seagull comes to them with a denden bill. turns out, the pirates denden company just grandfathered them into the old plan.
and you know what? it's not like they have any money and this plan is cheaper than all the other plans the company offers so they keep it. they get two separate numbers for the both of them and they dont think about it.
they decided to alternate the months they paid after one very terse call. or that was the plan but shanks is sooo forgetful all the fucking time and he never pays his denden bill on time. it ends up being buggy paying 8 months out of the year and shanks paying the other 4
(benn ends up setting up auto pay 5 years into traveling with shanks. what? it's not like they're broke.)
anyway buggy ends up becoming the terror of the east blue and shanks goes onto become an emperor and still neither of them change their numbers. they don't have the heart to.
and it's not something they consciously think about but sometimes when buggy gets drunk enough, he'll pull out his old ass denden book and trace his fingers over shanks' number. and if shanks is drunk enough he'll get halfway through dialing buggy's number before his brain catches up to what he's doing and stopping
anyway skip to marineford, and shanks is giving buggy a ride back to his ship. when they finally arrive at the island buggy's ship was docked on, both crews decide to throw a "im so fucking glad we lived through that/ captain buggy's the greatest!" party
buggy desperately tries to avoid shanks and shanks is literally holding himself back from looking for buggy but the party goes on and they get drunker and eventually they gravitate towards each other.
bc of course they do. they were shanksandbuggy, buggyandshanks, long before they were part of their respective crews. so they both sneak away from the party and they end up in shanks' room, with shanks sitting on the bed and buggy on his lap, curled around each other.
it feels just like their apt all those years ago. all those quiet nights on their fourth-hand couch, that they spent curled together -- buggy reading a book and shanks quietly talking his ear off.
(it was easier then. those two years where they had an apt together and the air was still heavy with the scent of hope. it was smth to look forward to -- 2 years and then captain will come back and there will be new adventures!
shanks got a job at the docks and buggy tried at least 17 different jobs before settling at a bookstore. and he'd go to work early in the morning and come back late at night to buggy in his hoodie, making dinner, ranting about rude customers.
and on weekends they'd both sleep in and cook breakfast together. or well buggy would cook breakfast, shanks would sit on the countertops and make buggy laugh. and then they'd spend the day inside or go out to eat. and it was good. better than good even. shanks could almost see why people stayed on land.
and then the execution happens and their father's blood stains the cobblestones crimson red and they seperate and then just as quickly as it started, it ends.)
that's when buggy notices the denden.
🤡: you still have that thing? 🍶: yes of course 🤡: and your number is still the same? 🍶: ....yeah. you? 🤡: yeah, never changed it. 🍶: why'd you keep it all these years?
and buggy may be drunk and his inhibitions may be lowered but he's still buggy at heart so he gives some bullshit answer
🤡 looking away: it was cheaper
and shanks knows he's fucking lying bc it may have been years since he last saw buggy but who knows buggy better than he does? who knows shanks better than buggy does?
🍶: c'mon bugs, tell me the truth. why'd ya keep it all these years? 🤡 unwilling to give in first: why'd you keep it all these years? 🍶: because i kept hoping that you'd be on the other end.
and buggy is floored.
🤡: .... what? 🍶: i kept hoping that if i kept my number the same, you'd call one day. 🍶: i can't tell you how many times i've picked up the denden, hoping it was you on the other end. 🍶, laughing sadly: i kept it all these years because of you. and you never called, not once. 🍶, cupping 🤡 face with his hand: why'd you never call bugs?
shanks is tearing up and buggy has already started the waterworks
🤡, sniffling: you knew where i was. why didn't you ever come and see me? 🍶: can you honestly say that you would've seen me? you probably would've told me to leave. so i stayed away. 🤡 hitting 🍶on the chest: idiot! i probably would've called at some point if you had came to me. but you never did and i just took it as a sign that anything we had was done and over. 🍶, grabbing 🤡 hands and staring into his eyes: how could you ever think we'd be done and over? it's only ever been you for me. only you. 🤡, full on crying by this point: idiot, idiot, idiot!
they're both curled over each other sobbing into each other's shoulder bc they could've had this the entire time but they were too fucking stupid
🍶: why'd you keep the denden, bugs? 🤡: haven't you figured it out by now? it was the only thing i had left of you. 🍶: you're such a fuckin sap, bugs. 🤡, blushing: shut up
#anyway that's all i have for now!#anyway if you have any ideas about the denden au then feel free to add on!#uhh the dialogue is so shitty here#but i only had enough for an outline#the dialogue deity only comes to me when i have a proper story idea#the pirates have their own denden companies bc using the legal ones is how you get caught#and the denden seagulls are so fucking vicious if you miss a payment. persistent too.#anyway auto pay in this sense is that benn leaves a pouch of berries in the same place each time and the seagull just takes it#denden au#buggy the clown#buggy one piece#op buggy#akagami no shanks#shanks one piece#op shanks#shuggy#shanks x buggy#one piece
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bioware really said "i made this whole ass cool as fuck last second reveal in absolution that gives dreadwolf so much potential, so help me if y'all say dragon age 2 is a bad game that can just be skipped in the triology ONE MORE TIME I WILL SEND MEREDITH TO BEAT YOUR ASS-" and honestly that is so correct of them
#dragon age#dragon age 2#dragon age absolution spoilers#dragon age absolution#da2#daa#when i say i fuckin screamed#leaped out of my chair even#justice for da2 its a great game actually all it needed was more time to make maps more varied and not backtrack so damn much#time the devs did not have. and honestly id take shitty map design over fumbled story any day of the week#im still screaming this series was so good#the ONLY complain is i wish it was a 12 episode series so it could pace itself well enough to keep the non game fans from being lost#i imagine the show is way lesser if you cant remember codex stuff and dialogue bits at drop of the head#how do people who dont know things like who venatori are feel about later episodes???#anyway funky dragon show good had a great time#bringie talks
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